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All Deviations
All Deviations


Paper folding is an art
Minute detail
Beautiful colors
I, a crane...
Revered, awe-inspiring
Soft voices caress me
Clumsy fingers tear me.

I think of my breathing counterpart
His silky white wings
How he disappears into the sun, unscathed
I wish my paper wings could lift me
By my will...

Now only a toss to the wind
Or a child's breath
Can send me spiraling to my earth
In a single flight
Before my wings are crumpled and forgotten
Not shattered in an epic battle with the elements--
But cast aside by the most trivial of judges.

Someday, I will find justice with the sky.
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Erm. Yep. Haven't written in a while. So here you are. Yip yip.
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~RyanXCole:iconRyanXCole: May 10, 2008, 6:49:42 PM
Hmmm...I do like it very much, but something about the last line seems a little akward...

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*Waltz-With-Me:iconWaltz-With-Me: May 11, 2008, 10:50:46 AM
*strokes chin*
I will definitely look at it again. Thank you! :D

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~RyanXCole:iconRyanXCole: May 11, 2008, 3:19:15 PM
You're welcome =D

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